from my notes on a recent submission in my popular fiction class:
"Her doe-shaped eyes gazed into mine" conjures up a very strange picture.
Try "Her doe-eyed gaze" . . . if you must.
Age is in the Eye of the Beholder
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Thursday, 6 May 2010
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