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Thursday, 6 May 2010

Tips for Aspiring Novelists - #1



from my notes on a recent submission in my popular fiction class:

"Her doe-shaped eyes gazed into mine" conjures up a very strange picture.

Try "Her doe-eyed gaze" . . . if you must.
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